
All is still here heading toward the bottom
An unknown undertaker brings out an orange and yellow pall.
Life is lain upon its bier in autumn.
The moments that once stood come now to fall.
Its somber nature keeps man in its thrall.
Burning crisp leaves exude an incense scent.
Does the past year have sins upon its soul
For which it must endure eternal taunt?
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Your dark tale has chilling questions with no answers! Well done!
Dwight
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Thanks. I’m really happy you liked it
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You are welcome!
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Brilliant, brilliant piece. I’m in awe from these lines:
“Does the past year have sins upon its soul
For which it must endure eternal taunt?”
If living in the past, it seems as if the narrator is slowly dying in the past. Mentally. With the past must die, this is sort of delineating that one must try to move forward, but how can one accomplish it when being reminded of it all the same? The past can be haunting, for sure, and it can really make an impact on our futures.
Well-written and well done.
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Thanks. Slavery to the past will always lead to death on the inside. I was trying to convey the image of the past as a person, even including a funeral in church, and life after death
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“Life is lain upon its bier in autumn” is the poem’s touchstone — poetically nicely placed!
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Thanks. I’, m really happy you liked it
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Suspenseful words with biting description. Well done my friend 👏
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Thanks I’m really happy you liked it.~
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We certainly carry our baggage with us from season to season, and from year to year. The question that is important is how do we store it. Good piece here Larry.
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Thanks. That’s quite true. Dealing with it makes all the difference
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A good reflection, with the question which I like:
For which it must endure eternal taunt?
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Thanks .I’m happy you liked it
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I love the way you frame your questions in this lyrical ballad form – a powerful piece.
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This is so well done!
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Best not to look back …. since we’re not going that way.
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I often like sneaking peeks though
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nice term: “eternal taunt”
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Thanks Lisa. It happens to some
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Beautifully done! 💝 I am especially drawn to; “Does the past year have sins upon its soul for which it must endure eternal taunt?” Something to think about.
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Thanks . I was trying to see how a time frame can even be like a person
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Truly, a brilliant piece! Thank you for following my blog!
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Thanks. I’m so happy you liked it
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You’re welcome!
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Thank you so very much for linking to my post
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very nice! A great poem! I loved it! ❤
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Thanks I’m really happy you liked it~
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Awesome! ❤
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