The Word War I Flying Ace

Posted on April 8, 2019 by larry trasciatti Posted in dversepoets, PersonalTagged dversepoets, humor, quadrille

The famous noble flying ace arrived

He was The scourge of Germany’s Kaiser

As he strode into the Parisian saloon

Toward his girlfriend he tried to surprise her.

He gave her red roses and a flute of champagne

Although he did not recognize her.

Unfortunately I haven’t tried dVerse Poets Pub lately. Here is my attempt at a Quadrille .

14 thoughts on “The Word War I Flying Ace”

April 8, 2019 at 5:07 pm Reply
whimsygizmo says:

Love it! 🙂

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1. April 8, 2019 at 5:18 pm Reply
  larry trasciatti says:
  
  Thanks~
  
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April 8, 2019 at 5:07 pm Reply
Jade Li says:

Very creative use of the prompt! Nice to see you at dVerse.

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1. April 8, 2019 at 5:11 pm Reply
  larry trasciatti says:
  
  Thanks. I haven’t been there in a while~
  
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April 16, 2019 at 10:05 am Reply
thotpurge says:

Interesting.. makes me want to know the backstory!

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1. April 16, 2019 at 10:14 am Reply
  larry trasciatti says:
  
  Thanks. I’ll bet our protagonist must have been through something intense if he couldn’t even recognize his own girlfriend
  
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April 16, 2019 at 2:03 pm Reply
anmol(alias HA) says:

Very interesting — the last line is certainly a mystery. 🙂

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1. April 16, 2019 at 2:26 pm Reply
  larry trasciatti says:
  
  Yes that’s so very hard to figure out
  
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April 16, 2019 at 2:58 pm Reply
Sherry Blue Sky says:

To me, he is the dashing hero of an old film…..so well described!

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1. April 16, 2019 at 3:03 pm Reply
  larry trasciatti says:
  
  Thanks. I got the idea from Snoopy but that image works really well too
  
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April 16, 2019 at 3:14 pm Reply
kanzensakura says:

Strange poem

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April 17, 2019 at 7:23 am Reply
Yvonne Osborne says:

Hmmm, yes, what is the rest of the story?!

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April 17, 2019 at 2:34 pm Reply
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) says:

Maybe he was more thinking of himself than the girl…

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1. April 17, 2019 at 2:35 pm Reply
  larry trasciatti says:
  
  yes he may have been so engrossed in his own life that he plum overlooked her
  
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The Word War I Flying Ace

The famous noble flying ace arrived

He was The scourge of Germany’s Kaiser

As he strode into the Parisian saloon

Toward his girlfriend he tried to surprise her.

He gave her red roses and a flute of champagne

Although he did not recognize her.

Unfortunately I haven’t tried dVerse Poets Pub lately. Here is my attempt at a Quadrille .

14 thoughts on “The Word War I Flying Ace”

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The famous noble flying ace arrived

He was The scourge of Germany’s Kaiser

As he strode into the Parisian saloon

Toward his girlfriend he tried to surprise her.

He gave her red roses and a flute of champagne

Although he did not recognize her.

Unfortunately I haven’t tried dVerse Poets Pub lately. Here is my attempt at a Quadrille .

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