
Ninth month is a new birth under a pall of burned orange leaves
Overture for a play whose first act is in a funeral parlor
Votive candles silently echoing ‘remember man that thou art dust….’
Elegaic memories are exchanged
Midnight seems to come too early
Burning incense is the only scent present
Effortlessly smoke finds its way toward a full moon
Ringing bells announce a new life
Fabulous! 🤩
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Thank you!~
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Thanks for sharing this. Anita
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Thank you .I’m so happy you liked it
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Beautiful, Larry 😍
~David
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Thank you
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What a beautiful, deep write, Larry.
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Thank you. I’m really happy you liked it
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Very somber! Love the line “Effortlessly smoke finds its way toward a full moon”!
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Thank you so much
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…the smoke effortlessly finds it’s way to the moon”
conjures up an image that I love — watching the campfire smoke making its way up to the moon…
sorry, I digress.
Love it 🌚
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Thank you
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Lovely imagery 🙂
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Thank you~
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Congratulations Larry! I chose your poem as the winner of this W3. Well done!
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Larry, Mazal Tov on being selected this week’s W3 PoW!
I’ve sent you an email at lt…ia@gmail.com … if you don’t receive it -OR- if that’s the wrong email for you, please email me at
DVDBGMLNY at GMAIL dot COM.
Thank you!
David
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thank you so very much
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For some reason my account won’t let me send you an email. I can’t get into the account I have because I can’t find the phone it is associated with. Please send me an email to 92street@gmail.com until further notice. Thank you
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forwarding the email to you now!
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your W3 prompt is now live, Larry!
Enjoy!
~David
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Thank you
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🤗
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