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‘Things have been getting so annoying around here ever since the new neighbors moved in next door,’ Fred told Mabel.
‘I have been noticing’, she said, ‘that there are all kinds of noises coming from their house lately at night.’
‘Most of them,’ he said, ‘are subtle and quiet but I occasionally hear such an odd Eruption, especially on weekends.’
‘I’ve heard,’ she said, ‘that no one has ever once seen them going out anyplace, which is so seriously weird.’
‘Maybe they don’t even really exist,’ he said, ‘and we have all been merely imagining them as some collective fantasy.’
‘That could be true,, of course,’ he said, ‘considering no other explanation works so we might as well believe it.’
Denise is back again with PROMPT WORD: ERUPTION
Of course, heaven forbid we bake them some cookies and go meet them, try to get to know them.
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Maybe if the noise ever stops they can make a friendly overture
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I like how they came to the conclusion that the noisy new neighbor whom no one has ever seen likely don’t exist. The eyes are more credible than the ears.
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Yes something must be making all that noise, even if no one has seen them physically
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If no one has seen the new neighbors but heard the new neighbors, perhaps Fred and Mabel’s new neighbors occupying the house are ghosts!
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That happens. So many people have reported things like that
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New students asking their music teacher in class:
Mrs. F who is that bearded guy with the bandana that we never see leaving the house to go somewhere?
That would be my husband…and you better pick up some new hobbies asap, like reading a book…instead of looking at my house all day!
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Mr. F is so harmless and has a right to expect privacy in his dealings with the young uns
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brilliant! I liked it very much larry!
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Thank you. I’m really happy you liked it
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When I first read SSS I either have an immediate thought/reply/comment or have to sit for a minute to make one up. Both can get one in trouble. 😦
I immediately pictured Fred and Mabel as being comic strip characters that appear in the daily newspaper. They witness the most amazing things just looking out their window. (and they have windows on all four sides of their house – which is a two-story bungalow.)
Even grass growing would annoy them as would the paperboy.
Hope I’m not in trouble. 😉
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Thank you. That may be exactly what they’re like under other circumstance.s They certainly give that impression in this story
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They both have such hyperactive imaginations
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On the other hand I may have them mixed up with the couple who lives across the street from me. Something so familiar.
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I believe it too! Nice one Larry.
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Good one z Larry
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Thank you Paul
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Good story…I’ve always wondered about “collective fantasy” 🙂
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Thank you . I have heard of it many times over the years . It must be true in some way somewhere
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I, too, recall hearing it in the past, but have never experienced it 🙂
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Maybe looking in the mirror?
Good one!
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Thank you .People so very often see their own really weird ways in others
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