Such A Sad Girl


Is the saddest girl

In our school.

Here she weeps.

Night and day, a broken heart

At St. Gabriel’s.


I really went to St. Gabriel’s long ago, and often use it as the setting for my poems and stories.  There was a girl named Theresa in my class but this isn’t about her.  I saw the Black Rabbit as a kind of albatross/scarlet letter etc.  a sign of very big trouble.  Welcome back to dVERSEPOETS POETS PUB (MEET JACKIE HURLBERT) . Here is yet another attempt at a Shadorma.

23 thoughts on “Such A Sad Girl

  1. msjadeli says:

    Perceptive take on it. The sad kids stick out like a sore thumb at school. I worked with a lot of sad kids in my job. I like your use of the shadorma form. Never tried it before but may need to.

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